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Hi friends, i usually don't post anything except a couple of thanks. i wrote a poem, so wud like to share it wid u. please comment on it..!!!
kuch hi pal ki yeh judaai hain har uss pal mein bas teri hi talaash hain har uss phool ki mehek mein basi tu hain har iss kali ke khilne ki wajaah hi tu hain chaaro dishaao mein bas tu hi chaayi hain kaan mein ghunjhti bas teri hi aawaaz hain hoton par bas tera hi naam hain dil ke dhadak ne ki wajaah tu hi hain subhanallah tera yeh chehra hain chun kar moti khuda ne tujhe banaya hain saare pholoon ki mehek tujh mein samaayi hain mere saanson ka chalna bhi ab tera naam lekar hi hain koi nazaara ab pyaara na lage tere bin par dikh jaati mujhe tu hain har raat din na shiqwa na koi guzaarish hain tu jo hain sang, lage sunhera sa zindagi ka har woh rang. THANKS!!!!! |
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nice one
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wow I like it a lot!
do share more, we would love to see some |
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Wow Buddy ....Its really Good....ya bro share more
Keep the Good work |
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Wow self written n so good
thanks a lot for sharing it with us |
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Quote:
i really liked these 4 lines |
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oo...its really nicee....
Good worrkkk |
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aww.. really nice. thanks for sharing....=] do post ur new one..=]
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thanks a lot friends..and i will share a new poem as soon as i write one..
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hmmm nice nice
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