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Old 07-11-2008, 11:50 PM
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Hi friends, i usually don't post anything except a couple of thanks. i wrote a poem, so wud like to share it wid u. please comment on it..!!!

kuch hi pal ki yeh judaai hain
har uss pal mein bas teri hi talaash hain
har uss phool ki mehek mein basi tu hain
har iss kali ke khilne ki wajaah hi tu hain

chaaro dishaao mein bas tu hi chaayi hain
kaan mein ghunjhti bas teri hi aawaaz hain
hoton par bas tera hi naam hain
dil ke dhadak ne ki wajaah tu hi hain

subhanallah tera yeh chehra hain
chun kar moti khuda ne tujhe banaya hain
saare pholoon ki mehek tujh mein samaayi hain
mere saanson ka chalna bhi ab tera naam lekar hi hain

koi nazaara ab pyaara na lage tere bin
par dikh jaati mujhe tu hain har raat din
na shiqwa na koi guzaarish hain tu jo hain sang,
lage sunhera sa zindagi ka har woh rang.


THANKS!!!!!
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Old 07-12-2008, 12:18 AM
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nice one
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Old 07-12-2008, 12:58 AM
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Default Re: A poem

wow I like it a lot!
do share more, we would love to see some
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Old 07-12-2008, 01:59 AM
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wow I like it a lot!
do share more, we would love to see some
thanks, i will share as i write new ones.
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Old 07-12-2008, 08:13 AM
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Default Re: A poem

Wow Buddy ....Its really Good....ya bro share more

Keep the Good work
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Old 07-13-2008, 01:41 PM
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Wow self written n so good

thanks a lot for sharing it with us
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Old 07-13-2008, 04:50 PM
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Quote:
koi nazaara ab pyaara na lage tere bin
par dikh jaati mujhe tu hain har raat din
na shiqwa na koi guzaarish hain tu jo hain sang,
lage sunhera sa zindagi ka har woh rang.


i really liked these 4 lines
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Old 07-14-2008, 01:28 AM
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oo...its really nicee....

Good worrkkk
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Old 07-14-2008, 02:20 AM
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aww.. really nice. thanks for sharing....=] do post ur new one..=]
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Old 07-14-2008, 05:50 AM
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thanks a lot friends..and i will share a new poem as soon as i write one..
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hmmm nice nice
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