Sharing my intial writing as a poem on a girl, a crush...and its called Proposal

I want to say this to you...
I wrote it by myself
for whats there in my heart,
the love from the start,
around the malls,
in every halls,
I came to you that day,
but you turned away,
time just run away,
I'm thinking of you all the time
asking you a question was that a crime
I have no hopes but i know
among all the pack who show their worth
what i want is what u feel worth,
forget what life in past was,
for a new day has,
In ur class lot of people make u down,
You didn't notice me but i keep noticing u around,
Im not shahrukh or salman khan,
neither I pretend to be,
what i have is just me,
I can love you forever,
swear never stop, and wont say never,
I can do anything for you,
If you want me to,
I stand in the sun with bare feet
cut my wrist and write your name on it
If you love me I can also sacrifice my life...
I keep all these people as eyewitness
getting down on my knees,
asking you from the bottom of my heart,
Will You Marry Me Please?

Nafees - The Invisibleboy...ahem Man

interesting! thanks for sharing!!...keep posting more if u have...=]

While I was reading it, it sounded more like a letter than a poem

Goof effort though

nice share....keep it up!!

nice one...tfs