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Sharing my intial writing as a poem on a girl, a crush...and its called Proposal
I want to say this to you... I wrote it by myself for whats there in my heart, the love from the start, around the malls, in every halls, I came to you that day, but you turned away, time just run away, I'm thinking of you all the time asking you a question was that a crime I have no hopes but i know among all the pack who show their worth what i want is what u feel worth, forget what life in past was, for a new day has, In ur class lot of people make u down, You didn't notice me but i keep noticing u around, Im not shahrukh or salman khan, neither I pretend to be, what i have is just me, I can love you forever, swear never stop, and wont say never, I can do anything for you, If you want me to, I stand in the sun with bare feet cut my wrist and write your name on it If you love me I can also sacrifice my life... I keep all these people as eyewitness getting down on my knees, asking you from the bottom of my heart, Will You Marry Me Please? Nafees - The Invisibleboy...ahem Man |
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interesting! thanks for sharing!!...keep posting more if u have...=]
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While I was reading it, it sounded more like a letter than a poem
Goof effort though |
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nice share....keep it up!!
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nice one...tfs
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